Jupiter
A fellow blogger, and exceptionally unabashed writer of phenomenal erotica, Jupiter Grant, has been overly generous in posting one of my poems on her blog with a loving review. Although some of my readers may not enjoy her work on any level of sexual relevancy, good writing is just plain good writing. Regardless of content, the ability to articulate, create, and seduce a reader into your world is a gift, and should be appreciated beyond any limited perceptions. I encourage you to dive as deep as you dare into her site at Jupiter’s Lair.
I have endeavored to return her kindness in poetic form. The poem below is dedicated to her and is a poor representation of what it must feel like to be drawn to this other-worldly beautiful woman and be snared in her practiced charms. Thank you, dearest Jupiter, and know I will always be your moon!
JUPITER
It is too strong for mere mortal man
Spinning in orbit around your heat
The pull is constant, unrelenting
It can take one off their feet
You have the power and cause to fall
Even the greatest risen thing
As if without your sturdy embrace
Any person would be given wing
The attraction is undeniable
And affects all who dare stray near
A fiery meteoric final plunge
The fate that gives men fear
You sparkle amid vast starred sky
A perfect pearl against vivid black
And I know what is given to you
Will never find its way back
An entrancing desire has me chained
To this womanly shaped black hole
Sucking me in so vivaciously
Great consumer of vacuous soul
And try as I do to break the bond
I feel completely in captivity
Like a moon above your beautiful world
I have fallen into your gravity
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[…] Thank you, lovely Brad. Followers, do go and visit Brad at Commonsensiblyspeaking, and you can read “Jupiter” here. […]
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**gasps, and with tears in eyes** I don’t know what to say, Brad. Thank you so, so much 💖 I am flattered, and touched, and absolutely rendered breathless by your beautiful words and your kindness. No one has ever written a poem for me, and I am totally blown away by the beauty of your poem, and the fact that I could inspire your creativity in such a way. I am a very happy, very grateful Muse! Kisses, kisses, and more kisses. Love, Jupiter x 💋💋💋💋💋💋
It is a travesty to think that no one has ever written a poem for you before! I am so glad you enjoyed it. You and your wonderful writing have certainly been a tremendous muse for me, and I am not sure how else one can thank someone for that kind of gift. A poem just doesn’t seem enough, but it is all I have to offer. My love returns to you sweet Jupiter, along with my sincerest thanks! 💕💝💋
Oh, it was perfect, and more than I could have expected. I can’t thank you enough for such a sweet and beautiful gift. 💖
Gorgeous! Also I 🖤 her. She is amazing and super talented. A well deserved piece!
Do not for one second think I forgot about you Miss Harley! Your ode is scheduled for tomorrow’s post. I can only hope you will think it does you justice! 💋
Awww thanks honey bee! You shouldn’t have 💋
The least I can do to say thank you for all your support 💋
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