Whittled Words – Skeltonic Verse
Welcome to the weekly series, Whittled Words. A series highlighting the innumerable types and styles of poetry to challenge any creative wordsmith. This week’s selection:
SKELTONIC VERSE POEM
If you feel the absolute urge to rhyme, then Skeltonic Verse is the way to go.
Skeltonic Verse, which today is sometimes also referred to as Tumbling Verse, is from the 15th century when English poet John Skelton (1460-1529) created short lines which resemble the hemistich of the Tumbling Verse of King James. It is a subgenre of Georgic, didactic verse, the verse usually being instructional in nature. The lines are of irregular dipodic meter with a tumbling rhyme.
Skelton pioneered the use of short stanzas with irregular meter, but two strong stresses per line (otherwise known as “dipodic” or “two-footed” verse). The lines rhyme, but there’s not a rhyme scheme per se. The poet simply rhymes against one word until he or she gets bored and moves on to another.
Skeltonic Verse form:
- written in any number of dipodic* lines without stanza break
- *dipodic which is a line with 2 heavy stresses and any number of unstressed syllables
- rhymed, tumbling rhyme is any number of mono-rhymed lines until the rhyme runs out of energy then the lines switch to a new mono-rhyme series
- line lengths should be between three and six words
Examples of Skeltonic Verse Poems:
DIPODIC WHAT?
by Unknown
Dipodic Verse
will be Terse.
Stress used just twice
to keep it nice,
short or long
a lilting song
or sounding gong
that won’t go wrong
if you adhere
to the rule here,
Now is that clear
My dear?
FINER THINGS
by Brad Osborne
Seek not more
Saved to store
No need for
Having more
Bounty pure
So, I implore
Let go these things
These diamond rings
No joy wealth brings
Such finer things
When one springs
Their angel wings
I hope you have enjoyed this entry to the series, Whittled Words. I look forward to your comments, and if you dare, maybe share your own Skeltonic Verse poem. Thanks for reading!
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This is really nice , Brad.
Thank you kindly, Yasmin!
Welcome, Brad.
I like this style; reminds me of some of Bob Dylan’s lyrics. Your poem is quite timely as well, with all the stockpiling/hoarding that is going on. There’s not need for such behavior.
Thank, Jim! It is an interesting style, but the rhyming gets to be a brain-number.
I guess since I usually think of rhyming as being at the heart of peotry, these types of poems would probably be the first kind I would attempt!
Trying out new poem styles is always fun. Here’s my attempt.
Corona, corona, corona
The world is in trauma.
Everyone everywhere
Is now living in fear.
Don’t come near
Keep a distance dear.
Wash your hands
Use disinfectants.
People dying
And panic buying.
But just hold on tight
It’ll be alright.
Thank you so much Brad for introducing this fun format. Also, I’m open to constructive criticism. ❣️
This is a great poem in the form! You handle the subject with grace and truth. Well done!
Thank you so much Brad!
This is a new kind of poem writing!! Short & sweet 👍
It can be short and sweet or as long as you would like. Thanks for reading and commenting!
Thoroughly enjoyed it Brad. These are very informative posts, thank you for sharing the knowledge. All the best to you!