Collaboration
Like choir hymns or harmonies heard
A blending of thought and subtle word
That mixes well two single souls
Creating beauty within the whole
The mixed and muddled of the minds
Swirl and spin, become combined
With an edit here and a comma there
The once singular becomes the rare
You hold the words I cannot find
For the thoughts trapped in my mind
And when your pen begins to numb
I’ll find more words and lend you some
You make me laugh, I’ll make you cry
Your love drips wet, my wit so dry
In the press we squeeze our thoughts
And find the beauty together wrought
This magic found in measured verse
The lyric long where words come first
The musings and broth of single roles
Blends a hearty soup to feed the soul
Beautifully penned ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Thank you for your kind words! I am glad you enjoyed it and I appreciate the support! ❤
Your welcome! 🤗
love your soup!
Brad, this is so beautiful!! I love collaborating with you!! It always amazes me how two people can share the same thoughts and ideas. I love collaborating with you because it seems to come so naturally. I don’t know if it’s because we are like minded or if you fill me with so much inspiration the words just seem to flow, but whatever it is, I’m already looking forward to our next one! I am so grateful for you!
“You hold the words I cannot find
For the thoughts trapped in my mind
And when your pen begins to numb
I’ll find more words and lend you some”
This is so heart squeezingly beautiful. As writers, this is the best possible gift. The entire poem has melted my heart. You are the best!! 😍🥰😘❤💋💋
Thank you, my dear fiend! I always enjoy our collaborations for all the same reasons. You are such a pleasure to work with and an exceptionally gifted writer. We do share a unique ability to see things in the same light and the freedom to express to each other without fear. That is special! I, too, look forward to our next opportunity to blend our words and thoughts, but I am going to leave it to you to find the subject for the next one. Thanks for always being exactly who you are! ❤🌹😘❤
The Whole is Greater than the Sum of its Parts…
Well put, my friend!
“Like choir hymns or harmonies heard
A blending of thought and subtle word
That mixes well two single souls
Creating beauty within the whole,” really beautifully written Brad. Every line well done. Have a truly blessed weekend. Love Jonikins. 🌺🌸😘❤️
Thank you, Jonikins! Hope you have a great weekend full of sunshine and blessings! ❤🌹🌷🌼
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Wow! This is the best thing I’ve read today. Absolutely stunning!
Thanks, Pete!
What a breathtaking piece of writing. It’s mesmerizing.
“You make me laugh, I’ll make you cry
Your love drips wet, my wit so dry
In the press we squeeze our thoughts
And find the beauty together wrought”
Brad, you are such a talent. It’s a pleasure and a privilege to read you my dear friend.
xoxoxo
You make my day, G! I am the lucky one to be able to call you friend! Much love, always! ❤
Beautiful written Brad 😊
Thank you, Vinayak!
Welcome, loads more to read from your blog, trying to catch up 👆
Beautiful 💜