First Fish
As just a young lad
I went fishing with Dad
His knowledge being passed
I woke with a yawn
As it was just dawn
No time for any breakfast
Thought weโd catch a few
At the special spot he knew
Where trees provided some shade
He fashioned my line
And I did just fine
With the first cast that I made
Then I reeled it in
And to my chagrin
There was no fish to be had
I tried a few more
But just like before
No catches made me sad
Why donโt the fish bite?
Do they only eat at night?
What am I doing so wrong?
Are these fish too smart?
When does the fun start?
Why did I come along?
This does not seem fun
To not catch even one
Why do people love this so
And filling my head
Were thoughts of my bed
And why I said I would go
Then the hundredth time
I cast out my line
I knew what it was about
Amazed when I looked
At the fish on my hook
I had caught my very first trout
I smiled all day
No others came to play
But I didnโt really care
I was not so cursed
Finally snared my first
And so happy to be there
There is no denying
Rewards come from trying
A good lesson to be had
And nothing more fun
Then a young son
Fishing with his Dad
what a sweet, beautiful ode to childhood, dad, and the simple yet incredibly powerful experiences of life
Thanks, as always, Beth! ๐ฃ
Wow. You ha e painted this so well. ๐๐๐ค
Thank you, Kendi!
Nice. I really like this poem. It brought back great memories of fishing, both with my dad and my grandfather.
Ahhh… those were the best of times! Thanks, Mr. G!
great poem; I like both the story it tells and the rhyming structure – well done, Brad!
Thank you, Jim!
I love the lesson, the sense of nostalgia it brings, and now I want to go fishing!! Lol. Very nicely done!
Thanks, Kristian!
A beautiful poem to those childhood moments that we will always remember and cherish. Great work my friend.
Thank you, Francisco! You are a blessing, my friend. Have a great day!
You are too Brad! Enjoy your Wednesday!
This poetry flows with an innocent touch, a touch of nature, a touch of togetherness and ya of course the fish. Its a heart warming tale of adventure, that will put a smile to anyone’s face ๐
Never went fishing with my father, but I can imagine what it would be like as a child. Thanks, Vinayak!
Well it’s a beautiful imagination