Hopeless
Posted by Brad Osborne on September 30, 2020 · 12 Comments
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Burst like a child’s red balloon
Hope hangs well-creased and thread-bare
Stippled in the scars of fate
Saddled with our every care
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Decaying scent to what has died
The smell of salt within our tears
Tragic the trodden path that leads
To facing our unknown fears
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It fades in our most trying times
Turning darker than burnt toast
Easily we fall without it there
When we are needing it the most
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We cannot lose our guiding light
Stumbling through the darkness that comes
The weight of life is hard to bear
As hopeless the mind becomes
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Heavy. But I tend to like the darker stuff.
Thanks Sudra! All light contains some darkness.
Good stuff , Brad. Your quill is potentially potent. Can write anything.. dark light delight happy sad ., it’s all there in your work.
Thank you, that is so kind of you to say Yasmin! If art reflects life than it should reflect all of it. Stay blessed!
we all need hope…
Loved the idea of the poem, the rhythm, the subject matter and the entire creation. Hope is the last thing one clings to and one cannot afford to lose it. Great work my friend!
Thank you Francisco! You rock!
Rock n’ Roll! Gotta love it 😊
😔 you’re writing me here
Don’t give up hope!
This one is deep. I love the references and choice of words, it has a touch of darkness and that’s the beauty of the poem. My favourite read in this week
Thanks V!