The Fall
Posted by Brad Osborne on October 26, 2020 · 21 Comments
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It is no surprise that we say
Being in love is a fall
Where once over the edge
We have no control at all
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Emotions like the air roars
Blocking out all other sound
And our flight of needed fancy
No thought of impending ground
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Floating in the ether rare
Where our dreams reside
We find what we hoped for
Perfection undenied
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Time turns insignificant
As long as weโre together
When it feels this blissful
We want to fall forever
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Feeling as if given wing
Our hopes rise to great height
With wind and love in our eyes
We earn a shortened sight
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I cannot warn you from the fall
As wingless born, we all must fly
And whether we can fly at all
Our hearts bid that we must try
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Oh, these soaring moments
Are Eden to us, my friend
But beware the sudden stop
Comes when the falling ends
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Good morning Brad. Excellent poem.
“And whether we can fly at all
Our hearts bid that we must try”
The finale is glorious.
Thank you, dear G!
This is about me, isnโt it…
Aren’t they all?
Not the soldier ones… actually very few of them
But more than anyone else…
Iโm quite undeserving
Just another thing you are wrong about
Good one, Brad. Love the humour and the wisdom .. Grady combo.
Thanks Yassy!
Heady.. sorry typo error
Great work my friend! Lovely poem with a very poignant message for being wingless beings our flight is usually short and the fall usually hard…but, thatโs what makes life interesting. All the best,
F.
Thank you kindly, my good friend!
My pleasure my brother!
Ah, pulling on those heartstrings again. Do you agree with the saying “Tis better to have loved and lost than to never have loved at all”? I believe the fall is worth the risk. ๐ I hope you’re having a great day!
I do agree with that saying. I also agree that four out of five dentists all hate the fifth dentist. There is probably the same amount of wisdom in both. Love you guys hope you are both well! ๐
๐๐คฃ๐๐คฃ You crack me up! We are well. Love you too! โค
I don’t want to be around for the fall… ๐
Love this line: Time turns insignificant as long as weโre together. Keep up the good work! Great poem! ๐
Thank you so much Omo!