Whittled Words – Rondine Poem
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Welcome to the weekly series, Whittled Words. A series highlighting the innumerable types and styles of poetry to challenge any creative wordsmith. This weekโs selection:
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RONDINE POEM
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If the term “rondine” sounds familiar, almost like rondeau, that is because it’s very similar to the rondeau. In fact, I am thinking of calling it the little rondeau, because it is kind of like a mini version of the rondeau.
So here are the basic rules:
- 12-line poem
- 2 stanzas
- 7 lines in the first stanza; 5 lines in the second
- 8 or 10 syllables per line, except in the 7th and 12th lines
- 7th and 12th lines are a refrain
- The refrain comes from the opening word or phrase of the poem
- Rhyme pattern looks like this:ย abbaabR/abbaR
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Examples of Rondine Poems:
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Betwixt Winter and Spring
By Jan Hedger
Too early for the tortoise to wake from sleep
Woolly jumpers and belted cardigans
Signs of life in the cities gardens
Over the horizon, the sun does creep
No warmth; as winter still lies deep
Birds not returned from foreign lands
Too early.
Lambs cry out for mother sheep
Spring tides shift upon the sands
Rivers flow as the willow bends
No salmon yet to leap upstream
Too early.
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An Aries Girl
By Ashley Jordan
When I was young I used to dream
of great achievements and success
Designing how to be the best
So every night I’d plot and scheme
Ambition set my eyes agleam
Competing always, without rest
When I was young
I pushed and charged ahead full steam
Working hard to complete my quest
Looking forward I onward pressed
My need to win a constant theme
When I was young
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Winter into spring
By Ashley Jordan
Winter into spring, espouses
Ice and snow to blinding sun
Thunder storms and winds that run
Madly round the streets and houses
Lifting skirts and tugging blouses
Gusts of mischief, having fun
Winter into Spring
Feisty March, the garden rouses
Tousled heads as blooms awaken
Leave their beds, the earth to brighten
Wanton nature, wild, carouses
Winter into Spring
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When Is When
By Brad Osborne
If not now, then when is when?
To hear the cries and lament
Of the lives and souls now spent
They have shouted and even then
You turn deaf to pleas again
And fuel the peopleโs discontent
If not now
When can all be seen as friend?
Judged only by the content
Humanity convergent
If you have no ear to lend
If not now
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I hope you have enjoyed this entry to the series, Whittled Words. I look forward to your comments, and if you dare, maybe share your own Rondine poem. Thanks for reading!
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Fascinating. I learn so much about just how many forms of poetry there are from your Whittled Words posts. Your Rondine is lovely, too. ๐
Thank you, sexy! ๐
You’re welcome, handsome ๐
no time like now. excellent
Thanks Beth!
I loved your example of this poetry style I have never written. Very interesting layout. I liked the other examples as well. However given everything going on in the world I loved your poem Brad. Why not now, why canโt we all just try a little harder to get along. Thank you Brad and hope you have a safe and blessed weekend my dear friend. Love, hugs and flowers. ๐โค๏ธ๐ค๐น๐ท๐๐ธ๐ป Jonikins
I liked this style of poetry; simple, yet has a nice flow to it. Your wonderful poem reminds me of the famous MLK quote:
“I have a dream that my four little children will one day live in a nation where they will not be judged by the color of their skin but by the content of their character.”
Some of the finest words spoken. Thanks Jim!
he did have a way with words, as do you…
Hi Brad, great post on Spillwords by the way! Well done, perfect for halloween my friend. I tried to comment but they said they were not posting due to watching for spam. Maybe the trick or treaters are already out there. Have a great evening my friend. Love Jonikins
Thanks Joni! I had almost forgotten about that. You are so kind with your words and your love. I appreciate all your support! Love back at you!
You are so welcome dear friend. Yes, your poetry is amazing Brad. Stay safe and thank you for your love. It means a lot. You are a great mentor Brad. Love โค๏ธ and many hugs ๐ค Joni
Quite a lovely rondine my friend. And as always, this is a great series and a very interesting learning experience. Thank you Brad!
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Thank you, F!
Always a pleasure Brad!