Whittled Words – Imayo Poem



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Welcome to the weekly series, Whittled Words. A series highlighting the innumerable types and styles of poetry to challenge any creative wordsmith. This week’s selection:

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IMAYO POEM

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The imayo is a 4-line Japanese poem that has 12 syllables in each line. If a 12-syllable line sounds unique for a Japanese poetic form, do not fret. There is a planned caesura (or pause) between the first 7 syllables and the final 5. The 5/7 syllable splits are the familiar patterns found in other Japanese forms like haiku, tanka, and senryu.

The imayo was originally written to be sung, but that is not a requirement. Also, poets have free range on subject matter.

Note: My attempt at this form shows my predilection for rhyming, but rhyme is not a requirement of this form in any manner.

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Examples of Imayo Poems:

 

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RUN

By Robert Lee Brewer

Her feet flow along the path – deer watch from the trees
Hair pulled in a pony tail – birds fly over head
Her eyes on the horizon – fish swim in the creek
Her mind replaying the past – a tree falls silent

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BOYCOTT

 

By Judi Van Gorder

Monday’s march of La Raza, Mexican flags wave,
laborers walk off their jobs, intersections clogged,
plain white T-shirts on brown skin, immigrants shout out,
“We are Americans too!”, some papered, some not.

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HER SONG

 

By Walter J Wojtanik 

 

I hear the song that she sings – so sweet a sound heard
Each word bringing me such joy – in the morning mist
a melody soft, lilting – I will hum along
Strong emotion resides there – this song that she sings

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WHY LOVE 

By Brad Osborne

 

Why does love even exist…but to give away

When our caring does persist…there the brighter day

On kindness we should insist…every word we say

No greater world could be this…heart on full display

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I hope you have enjoyed this entry to the series, Whittled Words. I look forward to your comments, and if you dare, maybe share your own Imayo poem. Thanks for reading!

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Comments
23 Responses to “Whittled Words – Imayo Poem”
  1. beth says:

    ‘heart on full display’ – yes

  2. ladysighs says:

    I enjoyed it very very much. I like “Whittled Words” as a description of things to come.

    Hew and Hack might well describe what I write. ;(

  3. One more fab edition my friend, smashing good sample I would say. Really enjoy learning when you provide such splendid examples of the poetry you talk about. Here’s a go at it:

    Each drop of water tells me – the sea is very warm,
    A grain of sand will capture – essence of the land,
    A distant ray of light will – blind us full of rage,
    Eternity is a sound like – voices that now pray.

    All the best my friend!
    FBC

  4. I love every word Brad 🌹❤️

  5. Jim Borden says:

    what a beautiful poem; each line stands on its own. and like you, I am a fan of poetry that rhymes.

    Were you singing this out loud while you were writing it? 🙂

  6. yassy says:

    Very interesting. I like your take on this. Thank you for sharing.

    A very happy valentines to you my dear poet friend. Stay safe and happy. Thank you for the inspiration .

  7. kristianw84 says:

    I really enjoyed this form, and your poem, of course! ❤

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