Balance
Posted by Brad Osborne on February 24, 2021 · 17 Comments
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Life exists in the balance
The teetering of cosmic scale
One more breath to breathe in
After every breath exhaled
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Every obvious good
Holds a little evil unseen
And life is much more grey
Found in the in-betweens
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Let nature be your guide
To the impermanence
Mountains erode away
Deserts just seas, past tense
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We must find our own paths
In a world that remains unstill
Not always the ease of down
Some parts will be uphill
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This balance in our lives
Is what we should strive for
Leaning too far in one direction
Will only your fall assure
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such a delicate balance
Yes, it always is….Thanks Beth!
Balance is everything. You are so right my friend. Nice work! Wishing you all the best!
FBC.
I think balance is part of what draws me to your art, my friend! It always seems in balance. Stay well!
Thank you my friend, and you’re right, I’ve always had a thing for symmetry…
Very beautifully written, Brad. Balance is the most critical aspect of life, especially when change is a hard universal factor so that change can lead to an equilibrium shift. Still, in every respect, balance is needed to scale harmonised existence.
Thank you, V! Nature is the prime example of how life always finds its balance. I appreciate your kind words and hope you and yours are well and safe!
So much truth in your words my friend. I love this stanza as I relate to the not always pleasant truth often found within.
“Every obvious good
Holds a little evil unseen
And life is much more grey
Found in the in-betweens”
Great piece my dear friend. Love to you. 💕❤️🤗😘Jonikins
Thank you dear Jonikins! You are always so kind. Love back at you beautiful!
😘😘😘thank you my kind and talented friend. I am honest to a fault. You are amazing. Have an amazing weekend. 🤗💕❤️😘
It’s all a balancing act….such a profound thought 💟💟
Thank you! You are too kind.
but maybe it’s good to fall sometimes, as long as we get back up…
A good point, Jim. As long as we get back up!
the getting up is kind of important 🙂
When someone asks how my life is different in retirement, it always includes some referral to balance. My plan is to never get out of balance again. Probably won’t happen—but worth striving for.
Time is always a benefit to finding our balance, Pete. Just glad to see you using yours in such a generous way!