You Are…



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You are…

A shadow in the dark

A fire without spark

An elegance in the stark

Something hard to find

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A bundle of nerves

A voluptuous curve

A thesaurus of words

Something hard to bind

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A bee without sting

A bird on feathered wing

A hymn that angels sing

Something gifted from above

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A hope given chance

A look within the dance

A beautiful romance

Something to be loved

You are…

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Comments
20 Responses to “You Are…”
  1. Ah, to find someone who would say – and mean – those utterly romantic words to me! The beauty of love is captured in your words!

  2. beth says:

    such a romantic –

  3. Carried Forth says:

    Lovely, beautiful words.

  4. Lovely words indeed mate!

  5. kristianw84 says:

    Gah! 😍 *Swoon* I loved this one so much I had to read it twice! In yesterday’s post you mentioned how you love when readers chose a specific line from your poems to show you what connected with them. I do this on occasion when a line really sticks out to me, but more often than not, when it comes to your poetry, I find myself quoting the entire poem. This is one of those times, but I will say I adore the way you ended this one. So romantic, so exquisite, and I’m longing for more of your beautiful words. Until tommorrow…….

  6. petespringerauthor says:

    Very pleasing to the ear.

  7. Jim Borden says:

    beautiful poem, Brad. I like the theme and the rhyming scheme…

  8. taglientimua says:

    Love this post! Such a beautiful poem! Followed your blog, can’t wait to see more posts xxx

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