Stay Away
~~~
Your passioned kiss
Like a bullet to the brain
A moment of bliss
Rocked with exquisite pain
~~~
Each touch a fire
Burning through my heart
Trembles with desire
But tears my world apart
~~~
Every longing look
Colored in amorous shade
A come-hither hook
In eyes repeated and played
~~~
And loving words
Exhaled in angelic voice
Where desires are spurred
And override mere choice
~~~
This I must say
And sadly, I must insist
Please, please, stay away
With your love I canβt resist
~~~
This is a fantastic poem Brad ! ππ€
Thank you, kind sir! I am glad you enjoyed it.
hard to take this stand, but it’s a must – well done
Thank you, Beth! Hoping you have a great weekend!
Powerful and I love the rhythm. Lovely work my friend!
FBC.
Thank you Francisco!
My pleasure my friend!
it’s hard to resist the forbidden fruit…
I just realized that delicious and forbidden have the same number of letters….coincidence?!?
I think not π
This is a lovely piece my friend. That third stanza was something else. Perhaps because it hit home a bit about how I could be in my early thirties. I love the “A come-hither hook” what a great line and I must admit I have been behind such a hook before. Never know where a look like that can lead. Great writing. Sending Love Brad and warm hugs. Jonikens xoxoxo
Thanks Jonikins! I am just not sure your vivaciousness retired after thirty. Sending tons of love!
Well you are probably right my friend. I am smiling now. Ok you got me, as yes I can still communicate pretty effectively with my eyes. Thanks for all the love. Stay warm and safe. Love β€οΈ Jonikins