The Mist
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Is it cloud that falls so gently
When mountain top is kissed
Or does it rise from the valley
This cold and haunting mist
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All pale shapes and grey shadows now
Sight rendered all but blind
Like whiskey drunk too fast somehow
A fogging of the mind
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Unknown fears in every crease
The fears of never knowing
My will cannot command you cease
And keep my fears from growing
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Being trapped in ghostly blanket
Suffered your icy chill
Yea sun would come I’d thank it
And temper failing will
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If but scant rays could break rampart
And glimmer added hue
A warmth to spirit and to heart
Gained strength to see this through
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Should graced light fail and hope abide
My journey will not stop
All my fears must be put aside
If goal the mountain top
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So, taunt me now you evil mist
You cruel, sadistic haze
Battle you, my will exist
Earning my brighter days
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Set upon me your eerie wrath
You may have chosen me
But I the chooser of my path
Will choose my destiny
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Powerful and strong words! We must all try to remember to push through the fog the eclipses our lives and look for the slivers of sunshine that await us.
Thanks sis!
Well spoken, especially that last verse, a most beautiful poem Brad!
Thank you dear friend!
You’re very welcome!
yes, we get to choose our own paths, in spite of all the mist and fog – beautiful
Thank you Beth!
and just think how wonderful it will be when you break through that mist and fog and are surrounded by glorious sunshine…
Right you are Jim, thanks!
you are welcome, Brad!
Brilliant and Beautiful!
Thank you Eleanor!
Wow that caught my breath Brad. So incredibly beautiful, the rhyming shows such skill and the mist becomes a person in this beautiful piece.
“Unknown fears in every crease
The fears of never knowing
My will cannot command you cease
And keep my fears from growing”
Your work never disappoints Brad. You write so beautifully and I love this one. Perhaps because I am sometimes frightened by the unknown as much as I try to be true to my faith, I can still be afraid. I need to have more faith in my prayers. What an incredible piece. BRAVO! xoxoxo Joni
Thank you Jonikins. We are all afraid sometimes, but that is where we find our true strength. Thank you for all your wonderful support and encouragement. Much love to you and yours! 🌹
You are so welcome Brad. Sending love back to you. ❤️🤗😘Jonikins