The Conscious Stream
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Rampant ideas and tangential thoughts
Swirl and eddy in constant motion
Bordered by subconscious banks
That steer them as they pass by
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Coursing around stones and rocks
Dug from unknown biases
Changing the direction of the flow
To find a less resistive path
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Where pebbles of like and dislike
Lay strewn on glimmering bottom
Some seen just as clear as day
Others are ripples of misperception
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The stream runs pristine at times
When the heart is given some say
But when fears muddy the waters
Those fears will cloud the mind
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We cannot control the journey
Of things that dwell in our heads
But we can ensure the water is deep
Thus, unfouled by shallow judgements
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Be mindful of the words that fall
On the mountain of your life
If they flow down unchecked
They become the ripples and waves
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Without a calm surface to look through
We can never see who we truly are
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Deep thoughts which demonstrate a deep understanding of human nature and as well your artistic sensibilities and talent. A beautiful poem with thoughts such as:
“We cannot control the journey
Of things that dwell in our heads
But we can ensure the water is deep
Thus, unfouled by shallow judgements…”
Great work my friend!
Thank you, brother!
My pleasure my brother!
Ah, we so need that calm at times to see. The rushing water and swirls tend to keep us moving without any chance to stop and really see. Great poem
Thanks Beth!
Wow, every line is so good!
Thanks Geoff!
A poem filled with great wisdom. If we want to make an impact it is better to say less and make sure it is worth saying, adding something of value to those who hear or read the words, otherwise better not to say anything at all. How lovely this wisdom is expressed Brad. Sending my love and prayers for an amazing and special week. Jonikins xoxoxoxo
Thanks Jonikins! You are always too kind! My best to you!
You are so welcome Brad. I just tell it like I see it. Sending love and hugs. 🤗❤️🦋Jonikins
The phrase, “we can’t see the forest through the trees,” comes to mind. I like pieces of prose that make me think, and this one accomplished that.
Thanks Pete!
wonderful poem, Brad. still waters run deep…
Thanks Jim!