Sea of Love
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As the adventurers in stories of old
Setting out upon the vast blue seas
To seek the new, so brave and bold
We set loving sail and so went we
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Uncharted course to far off lands
With the promise of fair blue skies
Sailored vows said while holding hands
And want for what beyond horizon lies
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But every voyage has its storms
When the wind and the gales hard blow
There tossed by the clouds that form
Our future we cannot ready know
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And after many leagues had passed
With the wave and wind beating hull
We found that our ship could not last
And we put in for a port of call
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No longer could she stay afloat
Holes had riddled her to death
Looking upon our little love boat
It was clear she had nothing left
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So, part we did upon new shores
With hopes you’d find your island true
Now marooned, I am still thankful for
This moment to explore with you
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this is so romantic
Thanks Beth! Kind of you to say.
Quite intense and beautiful Brad!
Thank you, my dear friend!
Always a great pleasure my friend!
This is so beautifully written Brad. The boat a metaphor for your love. This rhythm of this piece is so lovely Brad. I can just picture this dinged up boat and two lovers leaving the object that brought them so much pleasure. Beautiful Brad. Sending you my love. It is finally cooling off here and the hint of fall has come. I am glad to see it. Big hugs and my love coming your way. ❤️🤗❤️💕❤️Jonikins
Thank you, Jonikins! Squeezing you back!
You are very welcome my so appreciated friend. ❤️Love Joni
Yep, another good one!
Thanks, Geoff!
I know this is more about love, but my mind went to the bravery of early sailors and how they traveled across continents with little in the way of modern tools. Talk about a leap of faith.
What a great observation Pete! Can you imagine getting aboard a ship with only a hope of knowing where you are going, how long it will take to get there or what may great you on the other side? True adventurers!
I love the optimism of looking on the bright side of landing on an unknown island
Thank you Jim!
Beautiful and romantic!
Yeah, but what did you think of the poetry…..😁
Haha. The poem is almost as beautiful and romantic as the writer who wrote it.
My fishing expedition has been successful….Thanks beautiful!
Haha. Anytime!