Cause for Pause
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Our lives are filled with things to be done
Chores to be worked and errands to run
We scurry about at such a harried pace
For being idle never wins the rat race
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Each moment we have, we struggle and strive
As if, by doing, we will feel more alive
Yet, all the actions and the work that we ply
Simply watch as the precious moments tick by
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But there is something you have never been told
It is in the stillness that our lives unfold
Doing nothing, for a moment, is not a sin
And taking a break may be just how you win
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A pause from the world may feel a bit lazy
But the running around has only made you crazy
So, sit and be still, think of nothing at all
Relax your mind and let the worries fall
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Juts a moment of tranquility and peace
Where our lives find their true release
A minute not filled with things to do
In the quiet is found much more to you
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wonderfully stated, brad. when did being busy become a badge of honor? life is found in the quiet moments, the slow pace, the peace
Thank you Beth! That it is!
Wonderfully and beautifully written sir. This poem is a true eye-opener. I cannot wait to read more of your work.
Thank you for reading my comment.
Have a nice day ahead.
Thank you Akshiitaa! Very Kind of you to say! Welcome. You have a great day too!
Thank you sir.
Please, call me Brad.
So true.
We would all be better off if we took those moments to which you refer.
Perhaps we do not like or know ourselves well enough to spend time with ourselves.
Much needed verse. My mind relaxed as I read .. very soothing words .., I feel this letting go .. very well written. You turn the mundane to exotic , Brad.
Thank you, Yasmin!
My pleasure, Brad.
I heartedly agree with the sentiments in this poem. Of course, it’s only been in recent years (five or so) where I’ve learned the importance of being still and how that time of respite refreshes us in mind and body. “Rest periods”, as I call them, have become extremely essential for me to be able to be a functioning adult when needed!
Thanks sis! I am not sure when “idle” became a four letter word.
Yes!! I especially love being still with nature. Gazing at a waterfall, the stars, or simply watching the leaves fall off the trees. Perhaps, that’s why I love sunsets so much. It’s hard not to remain idle when there’s a captivating spectacle in front of me. ❤❤
Thank you and I agree. If a sunset cannot bring you to take a moment’s pause to observe it in peace, then nothing may.
wonderful poem, Brad. I like how it gives us license to take a break and enjoy that moment of doing nothing…
I am glad you enjoyed the break as it is likely your Christmas present from me this year!
It is greatly appreciated! My gift to you was the no price increase to read my posts… 🙂
Well received….
The absolute best part of retirement is no longer running the rat race. I’ve got just the right amount of things that keep my mind and body occupied without being stressed out.
You have found that all important balance Pete! Harder to appreciate the finer things in life if you don’t take the time to do so.
I hope I am strong enough to take your advice in this time of overload.
In this time of overload, the advice is even more important. Thanks Geoff!
Brad I am taking days. So much truth in this. Spending time with family and missing my WordPress family but need to love and spend time with my daughter and family. This is so true and such a gift. Thanks Brad sending special hugs. 🤗❤️🥰