You have resurrected the man

Saved a parched and dying land

Watered my world with wishes

In the rainfall of your kisses


Withered heart left scorched

Burnt by every carried torch

Finds, in you, the last refuge

Hope found amidst your deluge


Though some cracks remain

You are my respite in refrain

For I am the droughted plain

And your love, my blessed rain


18 Responses to “Thirsty”
  1. Very romantic in word and tone.

  2. Ah yes, blessed rain is love. Very well said my friend!

  3. Jim Borden says:

    a wonderful analogy of the rain and the droughted plain. I guess this poem was written in Spain… πŸ™‚

  4. petespringerauthor says:

    I not only like the words but the rhythm of this piece.

  5. Isha says:

    Hopeful and profound. 🌸

  6. I just plain liked it. Of course, I am always a sucker for rhymes.

  7. kristianw84 says:

    This is so beautiful and romantic! 😍

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