Whittled Words – Madrigal Poem



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Welcome to the weekly series, Whittled Words. A series highlighting the innumerable types and styles of poetry to challenge any creative wordsmith. This week’s selection:

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MADRIGAL

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The madrigal originated as an Italian form, as a pastoral song. The Italian madrigal is written in lines of either seven or 11 syllables and is comprised of two or three tercets, followed by one or two rhyming couplets. Just as variable as the lines and line lengths is the rhyme scheme. In fact, there’s so much variability that I am going to focus more on the “English” madrigal.

For the English-version of the madrigal (developed by Geoffrey Chaucer), the rules are much more defined.

Here they are:

Usually written in iambic pentameter.

Comprised of three stanzas: a tercet, quatrain, and sestet.

All three of the lines in the opening tercet are refrains.

The poem follows this rhyme pattern:

Line 1: A
Line 2: B1
Line 3: B2

Line 4: a
Line 5: b
Line 6: A
Line 7: B1

Line 8: a
Line 9: b
Line 10: b
Line 11: A
Line 12: B1
Line 13: B2

Note: As with many poetic forms, the madrigal has taken on a life of its own and artistic license has evolved it into anything resembling a lyrical song. Many examples can be found that meet few or no form requirements as the original form in either Italian or English.

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Examples of Madrigal Poems:

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WHAT I SHOULD HAVE TOLD MY DAUGHTER

By Lawrencealot

Remember Suzy, lovely dreams come true
so dream of love and settle not for less.
Be not so anxious for that first caress.

The kind of man you get depends on you.
A fallen apple does not much impress.
Be patient dear, for lovely dreams come true.
So dream of love and settle not for less.

The pressing, selfish man you must eschew
though urges will be strong, I shall confess.
Your prince will come and you’ll not have to guess.
You need not rush, for lovely dreams come true.
So dream of love and settle not for less.
Be not so anxious for that first caress.

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LIFE IN REVERSE

By Cona Adams

My journey’s ending where it first began,

a clownish act reversed in backward mode,

as brain cells scramble forth to read the code.

Perhaps I need a comprehensive scan

before diminished cells embrace implode.

My journey’s ending where it first began,

a clownish act reversed in backward mode.

I search to find a worthy rescue plan

my baby steps lead up and down the road

so often saddled with another’s load.

My journey’s ending where it first began,

a clownish act reversed in backward mode,

as brain cells scramble forth to read the code.

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TRUEST LOVE

 

By Brad Osborne

 

The truest love can never really die

It lives on, loves on for eternity

The bedrock for all of humanity

In its absence we may want to ask why

When it has disappeared from what we see

The truest love can never really die

It lives on, loves on for eternity

Though love may hide from a long searching eye

If it is sought with a voracity

The harder to find is the given free

The truest love can never really die

It lives on, loves on for eternity

The bedrock for all of humanity

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I hope you have enjoyed this entry to the series, Whittled Words. I look forward to your comments, and if you dare, maybe share your own Madrigal poem. Thanks for reading!

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Comments
14 Responses to “Whittled Words – Madrigal Poem”
  1. beth says:

    this is quite a mix of samples – a parent’s word of warning, a worry looking back and ahead, and a true love. how does the madrigal form connect or relate to madrigals in music? or does the word have a different meaning in music?

    • Brad Osborne says:

      In song, the madrigal is an unaccompanied composition of a number of voice parts, usually ranging from two to eight different voices. The only real correlation is that the phrasing musically follows the same guidelines of two or three tercets followed by one or two couplets. Most madrigals musically invite different melodies for each verse rather than a melodic theme strung throughout the entire piece. Poetically and musically, they are certainly cousins.

  2. K.L. Hale says:

    I enjoy the Whittled Words~I love keasvjng new ways word patterns speak for souls. The 2nd poem is particularly poignant for me (I recovered from a TBI that left an impairment in my memory, this coupled with other health issues, spurred my blogging and writing for healing. Words are so healing! Thank you!

    • Brad Osborne says:

      I am sorry to hear about your struggle with health issues. But am proud to see that they do not define you. Writing can certainly have a remarkably healing effect. Both for the reader and the writer. Thank you for all your support! Much love!

  3. jonicaggiano says:

    This is so beautiful Brad. You write about love so wonderfully. Such a romantic piece. Brad I am so excited I reminded people to go in and vote on my post and on Twitter. I am so excited for you to be the second listed writer as Author of The Year. I am crossing my fingers and my toes. Sending you big hugs this morning. You will be on my mind until I know. Have a blessed weekend my friend. Big hugs and love ❤️ Jonikins

    • Brad Osborne says:

      Thank you, Jonikins! But do not fret about this too much. There are many worthy nominees and winning is not everything. No matter what awards lie ahead in my life, it is the addition of friends like you that make it all worthwhile Thanks for all the love and support!

      • jonicaggiano says:

        Thank you Brad. I went back to read one of your many publications for 2021, “Warrior’s Prayer,” and was so touched. Of course I have read and voted for them all as they are so beautifully expressive and provocative. You are among many talented writers but you are and were my choice. I love your mastery of form and rhythm. We will have to wait and see. Who ever wins I will be happy for them. Just being nominated is such an enormous honor Brad. Yes, I cherish the friendship I have made as well, many feel like family. Sending you all my love, hugs, congratulations on being among the twelve talented writers. ❤️❤️🤗🦋🥰🌹Jonikins

  4. Jim Borden says:

    nciejob with your poem, Brad. It looks like a pretty complicated rhyming scheme. I wonder what would motivate someone to create such a pattern…

  5. kristianw84 says:

    Absolutely beautiful!! I also really liked “Daughter,” thanks for sharing. I’m always impressed by how well you write these forms.

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