Whittled Words – Tricube Poem
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Welcome to the weekly series, Whittled Words. A series highlighting the innumerable types and styles of poetry to challenge any creative wordsmith. This week’s selection:
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TRICUBE POEM
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Unlike the many classical forms we have already covered in this series, the Tricube is a newer form and relatively unknown. Plus, it is fun and easy to learn. This mathematical poem was introduced by Phillip Larrea.
Here are the rules of tricubes:
- Each line contains three syllables.
- Each stanza contains three lines.
- Each poem contains three stanzas.
So, we are talking cubes in mathematical terms (to the third power). No rules for rhymes, meter, etc. Just three, three, and three. It is as easy as that!
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Examples of Tricube Poems:
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MY WORLD
By writerdeviant
My crown bears
the deep thorns
of regret.
Memories
burn dark holes
in my mind
where no one
treads lightly
or remains.
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RESIST
By Robert Lee Brewer
i avoid
dead end streets
like the plague
because i
don’t enjoy
backtracking
but the plague
is a street
with no end
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WHEN A CHILD DIES
By Joseph Moon
A sad heart
pounds in vain
her young Son
Laid to rest
church bells chime
as rain falls
Soft dirge songs
wet tired eyes
Cry! God cries!
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EVERY
By Brad Osborne
Every path
Strewn with stones
Tread lightly
Every day
Lovely gift
Hold tightly
Every man
Given chance
Shine brightly
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I hope you have enjoyed this entry to the series, Whittled Words. I look forward to your comments, and if you dare, maybe share your own Tricube poem. Thanks for reading!
i love this free and easy style
Thanks, Beth! I love the symmetry.
“Shine brightly”… brought a smile to me!
Thanks, Joy! You look good in a smile!
😊
my kind of style! I liked your last three lines; all most of want and need is hope and a chance…
If hope remains, there is always a chance…
a perfect way to describe it…
This is a very nice and meaningful style and your example was brilliant!
Thank you, my friend!
You’re welcome!
You have made the most of your chance to shine brightly.
Thank you, my friend!
I like this poetry style. Lovely. All the examples were lovely and yours was beautiful Brad. I wrote a little one.
Dive from sky
The mighty
Peregrine
Stream line flight
Fastest bird
On this earth
God sees her
Divine sight
Glorious
Sending you lots of love dear Brad. Jonikins
A wonderful example of the form, Jonikins! You are a natural.