Unbroken Night
There are times when you think you will not get out alive
When forces are plotted against your plan to survive
When the crushing weight of life pushes you down
And a myriad of great injustices around you abound
It is easy, in those darkest moments, to lose hope
Weighed by all the trials and tribulations you must cope
To suddenly feel that you have become so small
That to the rest of the world you don’t matter at all
Every person wrestles with these feelings at times
As self-doubt and self-worth collide in our minds
And though our pains and losses may greatly vary
The same weight of the world on our shoulders we carry
Do not let the malaise of a particularly dark moment
To creep in so deep as to become a component
A constant cog in your emotional machine
That drapes the soul so no hope can be seen
Fight back with strength of heart for all that you are
There were times when you didn’t think you’d get this far
But you saw it through with great strength and pride
Finding life again when you broke through the other side
Stand strong and rail against those chanting head voices
Know that your road ahead is still filled with choices
And know that with you we all stand in support
For no one wins by a grieved fatal final resort
Though your light may have dimmed in your eyes
Its necessity may come as somewhat a surprise
For our world without your sacred loved light
Moves us all a little closer to a darker night
And although it may be somewhat cliché to say
That it is darkest just before the break of day
Truer words may have never been spoken
And can help push away the night unbroken
such a wonderful poem of hope and self-worth
Thank you, Beth!
“It is easy, in those darkest moments to lose hope” indeed. It is very easy. Beautiful poem👏👏
Thank you, Harlyn! Even in the darkest of nights, there are stars that shine if we but look for them. Stay strong and stay positive!
Oh, thank you!
I feel exposed…
Don’t we all at times? Love you, sis!
So true! You never know, with that next punch you’ll knock him out, or just over that hill…never surrender, never give up…
Amen, brother! Thank you.
You’re very welcome Brad, and also, I truly appreciate your comments on Spillwords! Thank you! (I wasn’t able to reply on that portal)
My pleasure, my friend!
Not sure if this is your poem, but I needed to read it today ❤
Thank you, Francine! I can assure you it is my own work, and I am glad it found you at the right time! Stay strong and push forward!
Beautiful Brad and so very true. There are not many of us that can say we have not experienced this feeling. I especially loved the ending stanza Brad. Sending huge hugs and lots of love Jonikins
Thank you, Jonikins! Love to you and yours.
You are so welcome Brad. Blessings to you. ❤️