Whittled Words – Hay(na)ku Poem
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Welcome to the weekly series, Whittled Words. A series highlighting the innumerable types and styles of poetry to challenge any creative wordsmith. This week’s selection:
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HAY(NA)KU POEM
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Just so you all do not think I am stuck on the old dusty long verse of yore as an outlet for expression, this week I bring you something fresh and new. Hay(na)ku is a simple poetic form, and it is also one of the newest. It was apparently created in 2003 by poet Eileen Tabios, a publisher with Meritage Press. And this should play well into the hands of my readers who enjoy the “six-word story” form.
Hay(na)ku is a 3-line poem with one word in the first line, two words in the second, and three in the third. There are no restrictions beyond this. Unlike its obvious parent, traditional haiku, it requires no syllabic count, cutting words, seasonality, or specifically natural subjects. It is very free range.
A simple example:
Boys
chase girls
on the playground.
There are already some variations of this new poetic form. For instance, a reverse hay(na)ku has lines of three, two, and one word(s) respectively. Also, multiple hay(na)ku can be chained together to form longer poems.
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Examples of Hay(na)ku Poems:
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HAY(NA)KU #1
(Coupled and Reversed)
By Lawrencealot
Understanding
does not
solve the problem.
Taking thoughtful action
most usually
does.
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NO DO-OVERS
By Adnama17
Mother
Emergency revenge
Nowhere to spare
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PRISONER
(Reversed)
By Bengalibelle
flying back home…
each star
brighter
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TICKING
(Coupled and Reversed )
By Brad Osborne
Time
Ticking tacit
The counting creeps
Louder and louder
The secondhand
Sweeps
Sweeping
Past days
In life sweet
Passing just once
They never
Repeat
Listen
Carefully now
To steady song
Find the music
For however
Long
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I hope you have enjoyed this entry to the series, Whittled Words. I look forward to your comments, and if you dare, maybe share your own Hay(na)ku poem. Thanks for reading!
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commonsensiblyspeaking 
you really kicked it up a notch!
Anything worth doing is worth overdoing. Thanks, Beth! Have a great weekend!
I love this form of poetry! It’s simplicity is so succinct and “staccato”. Few words, great meaning.
Brad.
Great poet.
Weaver of words!
Karla.
Strong woman
of great faith!
Thank you, my friend!
Aww 🥰 This made my day, Brad! Thank you, my friend!
Wow! I really enjoyed this form. Look at you going above and beyond. I would expect nothing less. I love this!!
Thank you, Kristian!