Is It Just
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Is it just the twilight
Sparkling in your eyes
Holding me mesmerized
In the coming of the night
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Is it just far off flowers
Carried by evening breeze
That brings me to my knees
And kills my will to fight
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Is it just the hunger
To taste your full red lips
To find what must exist
In a smile so very bright
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Is it just whispers in the air
The has me spellbound
In siren’s lyrical sound
Felled by promised delight
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Or is it just you
Being forever just you
In the little things you do
That holds me now so tight
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“I love it when you wax rimantic.” 😉
This is beautifully written, Brad. I can feel your longing. I know you love a good ending. You told me a long time ago that a good poem starts at the end. This ending sunk its hook in pretty deep. 😍
Romantic* (This is why I don’t talk before coffee 🤣)
Thank you for your generous words. I do love a good ending! I am glad this touched you and I appreciate all your love and support! ❤
sometimes the little things are everything
Yes, they are. Thank you, Beth!
Most beautiful verses my friend!
Thank you, brother!
Always a pleasure my brother!
Beautiful and romantic 🥰
You are too kind. Thank you, my friend!
Awesome
Save this one for valentines
Thank you!
Drop the mic with this one, Brad. The sentiments and rhythm make this a contest-worthy entry.
Thank you, my friend! Happiest of holidays to you and yours!