Unbroken Night
There are times when you think you will not get out alive
When forces are plotted against your plan to survive
When the crushing weight of life pushes you down
And a myriad of great injustices around you abound
It is easy, in those darkest moments, to lose hope
Weighed by all the trials and tribulations you must cope
To suddenly feel that you have become so small
That to the rest of the world you don’t matter at all
Every person wrestles with these feelings at times
As self-doubt and self-worth collide in our minds
And though our pains and losses may greatly vary
The same weight of the world on our shoulders we carry
Do not let the malaise of a particularly dark moment
To creep in so deep as to become a component
A constant cog in your emotional machine
That drapes the soul so no hope can be seen
Fight back with strength of heart for all that you are
There were times when you didn’t think you’d get this far
But you saw it through with great strength and pride
Finding life again when you broke through the other side
Stand strong and rail against those chanting head voices
Know that your road ahead is still filled with choices
And know that with you we all stand in support
For no one wins by a grieved fatal final resort
Though your light may have dimmed in your eyes
Its necessity may come as somewhat a surprise
For our world without your sacred loved light
Moves us all a little closer to a darker night
And although it may be somewhat cliché to say
That it is darkest just before the break of day
Truer words may have never been spoken
And can help push away the night unbroken
beautiful poem of hope
Thank you, Beth!
Never stop fighting, the fight ends with the enemy destroyed and only then. Well said my friend!
Thank you, my dear friend!
You’re very welcome! All the best!
I love the hope in this message, Brad! It is not always easy, but we must never stop fighting. You have such a beautiful way with words!
You are right. Fighting is rarely easy, but often a necessity if we are to hold onto the things we love. Thank you for your kind words!
“There are times when you didn’t think you would get this far” is a strong knot in the rope when one feels like they are slipping off.
I love how you phrased that, sis! There is a poet in you somewhere. Love you!
A beauty of a poem. Beautifully composed. Each word woven with meaning and insight. Love every single word of this gorgeous poem.
Thank you so very much, Yasmin! Your comments always lift my spirits.
You are very welcome, Brad.
Brad
Thank you my friend.
You posted this in perfect timing
I will read this daily if need be
It speaks to one’s mind and daily thoughts.
Thank you, Carl! May your dawn always be right around the corner, my friend!
Great message, Brad! I particularly like the line, “And a myriad of great injustices around you abound.”
Thank you, Pete!
I am beginning to suspect that I will not be getting out alive but your words are great inspiration in the meantime.
Thanks, Geoff! Every day above ground is worth fighting for. Be well, my friend!