Whittled Words – Trenta-Sei Poem
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Welcome to the weekly series, Whittled Words. A series highlighting the innumerable types and styles of poetry to challenge any creative wordsmith. This week’s selection:
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TRENTA-SEI POEM
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The Trenta-Sei form was created by the poet John Ciardi. It’s a 36-line poem (the word “Trenta-Sei” is Italian for 36) that has a rhyme pattern and refrains. In other words, it’s a lot of fun.
Here are the basic guidelines:
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- Six sestets (or 6-line stanzas).
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- Each sestet has the following rhyme pattern: ababcc.
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- Each line in the first stanza makes the first line in its corresponding stanza. So, line 1 is the first line of the first stanza; line 2 is the first line of the second stanza; etc. (a little like the cascade poem.)
Ciardi’s “A Trenta-Sei of the Pleasure We Take in the Early Death of Keats” was first published after Ciardi’s own death and is the shining example of the form. That said, I do not believe topic of life and death are required to be the subject of Trenta-Sei poems.
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Examples of Trenta-Sei Poems:
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A Trenta-Sei of the Pleasure We Take in the Early Death of Keats
by John Ciardi
It is old school custom to pretend to be sad
when we think about the early death of Keats.
The species-truth of the matter is we are glad.
Psilanthropic among exegetes,
I am so moved that when the plate comes by
I almost think to pay the God—but why?
When we think about the early death of Keats
we are glad to be spared the bother of dying ourselves.
His poems are a candy store of bitter-sweets.
We munch whole flights of angels from his shelves
drooling a sticky glut, almost enough
to sicken us. But what delicious stuff!
The species-truth of the matter is we are glad
to have a death to munch on. Truth to tell,
we are also glad to pretend it makes us sad.
When it comes to dying, Keats did it so well
we thrill to the performance. Safely here,
this side of the fallen curtain, we stand and cheer.
Psilanthropic among exegetes,
as once in a miles-high turret spitting flame,
I watched boys flower through orange winding sheets
and shammed a mourning because it put a name
to a death I might have taken—which in a way
made me immortal for another day—
I was so moved that when the plate came by
I had my dollar in hand to give to death
but changed to a penny—enough for the old guy,
and almost enough saved to sweeten my breath
with a toast I will pledge to the Ape of the Divine
in thanks for every death that spares me mine.
I almost thought of paying the God—but why?
Had the boy lived, he might have grown as dull
as Tennyson. Far better, I say, to die
and leave us a formed feeling. O beautiful,
pale, dying poet, fading as soft as rhyme,
the saddest music keeps the sweetest time.
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THE MONASTERY
By Brad Osborne
The shrouded and hooded monks pray
Incantations echo on low
The penitent words that they say
Hold only the sins that they know
And in their chanted reverie
A hoped for and blessed destiny
Incantations echo on low
In evening vespers of the day
And in the shadows that long grow
Faint cloistered calls ring and replay
Practice narrows what mind can see
Focus found in toned symphony
The penitent words that they say
Monotoned and rhythm slow
In the ears a metered decay
A quiet breeze that gentle blows
In easy sounds less harmony
Doth rise with notes a soul set free
Hold only the sins that they know
Found living an unselfish way
The reaping of what one will sow
Underlies what sacred convey
A lifetime vowed camaraderie
A peaceful life lived brotherly
And in their chanted reverie
No thought given to yesterday
The only path to seek should be
Gifted moments of every day
No thought given to tomorrow
No precious thing left in escrow
A hoped for and blessed destiny
As in nature, a balanced roe
The dark light of duality
Yin and Yang the constant tarot
Chanting men stroll not far away
The shrouded and hooded monks pray
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I hope you have enjoyed this entry to the series, Whittled Words. I look forward to your comments, and if you dare, maybe share your own Trenta-Sei poem. Thanks for reading!
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I do like the cadence of this pattern –
Thank you Beth!
Nice rhythmic and, you’re right, fun!
Thank you my friend!
You’re welcome my friend!
impressive; a 36 line poem seems quite challenging. as to the poem itself, I can’t imagine the life of a monk…
Thanks Jim!
you are welcome!
This one is a little more complex but no surprise you make it seem simple.
“Underlies what sacred convey
A lifetime vowed camaraderie
A peaceful life lived brotherly
And in their chanted reverie
No thought given to yesterday”
What a beautiful example of the Trents-Sei Poem.
Sending lots of love ❤️ Jonikins
Thank you Jonikins!
My pleasure friend. Jonikins ❤️🤗